Wich one is better

Feb 11

Me and my friend Randy have wrote these poems we wanna whos is better...
Score by....watever

this is randys:
TEAR:
I wish i was a tear
there in your heart
born in your eye
lives on your cheek
dies in your lips
love is what it takes
to live and to die
so i slit my wrist
to make you cry
watch me bleed
as i die
a tear for a tear
and thats what it
takes for me to die:

Now here is mine
My Bloody Rose
by:me
This Rose That
I give to you
is stained with my own blood
I give it to you
it's all i got left
it's as black
as my heart
as red as the
love i once had for you
My Rose
This Rose
The Only Rose....
This Bloody Rose
The Only Thing that
Resembles My Broken Heart
This Rose
The Only Rose
MY BLOODY ROSE...
Live Love Fight

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  1. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 11

    both crap and you look like david arquette.
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  2. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 11

    wasted years wrote:
    both crap and you look like david arquette.
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    dude u sayin u dnt like them or wat...and i fuckin look like who...
    Live Free....Die Well

  3. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 11

    I like them both. I like Gothic imagery though x
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  4. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 11

    sooo depressing >.<

    i thought they both were pretty good

    i liked yours a little better...it flowed more than the other one.


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  5. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 12

    Ok i'm going to be honest with you, I prefer the second one which you wrote because it's better in my opinion. :)

  6. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 12

    I like it !!! :)) Both are great ! But i would choose 4 me, randys .!
    Great job 4 u both!
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  7. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 12

    You both made me happy. Such cheery poems. Now where did I put my razor...?


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  8. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 12

    I like them, Kinda depressing but good.

    Mile by mile we are farther apart.
    Now its one empty bottle and two broken hearts.
    Night after night we are falling apart.
    Now its two broken bottle and four emptys hearts.

  9. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 12

    I like the firstt one.It makes me wantt to cut myselff.
    So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you and help you; I will uphold you with my righteous right hand. - Isaiah 41:10

  10. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    Prozac wrote:
    I like the firstt one.It makes me wantt to cut myselff.
    So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you and help you; I will uphold you with my righteous right hand. - Isaiah 41:10


    which is of course a good thing

    I have to admit I don't like either of them. Sorry

    .:-:-:-:.

    Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!

    I’m so sick of waiting

    It’s time to make a move

  11. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    Both are awesome!! Love the emotions, love blood and roses xD

  12. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    Both are awesome!! Love the emotions! Love, blood and roses.. u can combine these songs and come up with a great rocking song!(suggestion) =)

  13. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    proach rocks{{Lacey}} wrote:
    sooo depressing >.<

    i thought they both were pretty good

    i liked yours a little better...it flowed more than the other one.

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    I Agree

  14. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    i like yours because it sounds really good and i can relate to it.
    Jacoby Rocks!!!!

  15. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 13

    I would have to say Tear the first one I do like both tho

  16. RE: Wich one is better

    Feb 14

    atleast u were honest
    Live Free....Die Well

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