the river poem

Wed, Apr 4, 2012 at 10:17 AM By: N0B0DY 3PIC

A Stream
Not a normal stream
Not a stream of water
A stream full of
Deception, grief, lies
Once a stream of love
Flowing rapidly
A never ending stream of love
Now the love has been
Washed away
No longer a stream
No longer calm
But a rapid flood
Destroying what was once
Good in are lives destroying
The very foundation of
What we made together
Over the months and years
Simply gone within a day
The sides crumble
Everything gone
What once was love
Is now bitter hate

  1. Sundry♥ avatar

    On Jul 31, Sundry♥ said:

    I love it, J..
    On line 15, "Good in are lives destoying", "are" shoud be "our".
    My only problem. (:

  2. -Shadow- avatar

    On Apr 05, -Shadow- said:

    that's beautiful :)

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