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New Poem!
You probably don't know this but I write poems
Please tell me what you think of my latest
I've called it:
A lifetime search
"Seek to live
Seek the rain
Seek to fly
Seek the pain
Seek to seek
Seek to find
Alone I stand
Alone I die
I searched all my life
I've seeked and survived
After all this what is left?
A blank
A hollow
A nothing but sorrow
I don't see a tomorrow....
Please tell me why I am here
With no purpose with no life
Why should I remain when empty?
I rather lose my life
Than live as a meer desguise
This time, there's no otherwise...."
Comments
On Jan 30, Katherine XD said:
I love it its amazing :) ur amazing ^_^
On Jan 26, †An Eve†ning's Black Rose† said:
Amazing =]
On Jan 25, †An Eve†ning's Black Rose† said:
I luv it. u have some reale talent :)
On Dec 01, lita619 said:
I LOVE IT!! ur rele good at writing, u shuld totally get it published!!
On Nov 23, proach455 said:
dude! thats very good! XD
On Nov 23, †An Eve†ning's Black Rose† said:
That's a good poem, u shuld totally publish it. :)
On Nov 16, Ellie Electric said:
Wow that poem is really deep and its amazing I love to write poems to
On Nov 14, leigha224 said:
I love it. its really good.
On Nov 14, Allyie said:
thats really good
On Nov 02, WhatSeparatesMeFromYou(:-Mrs.WilliamsB¡tches!!:D said:
i love this poem you're a good poet